Networking is essential to building connections that can potentially benefit you further down the line. It also helps you create a โcircle of influenceโ that provides insider information and helps you stay clued in to everything thatโs going on within the industry.
While networking is a great way to build your network, the real magic happens in the follow-up that takes place after the first contact. And thatโs where, more often than not, most people fail. Without consistently following up with the contacts you meet, you can risk the initial enthusiasm growing cold and losing out on future opportunities for growth.
Email has been seen to be the most effective and non-cringey way to reach out to new prospects. But with the average person receiving about 121 emails a day, how do you cut through inbox clutter and move the relationship forward from โjust metโ to โletโs meet up?โ
The answer to this seemingly complex problem is simple โ itโs mastering the way you write your networking email subject lines.
In this article, weโll be covering the most important tricks of the trade to craft effective subject lines for networking emails that stop the scroll, capture attention, and win genuine, heartfelt responses.
Why networking email subject lines are important
Optimizing your follow-up email subject lines provides several important benefits:
โ Creating an attention-capturing first impression: The average executive deals with more than a hundred emails a day. Most emails from unknown senders and generic subject lines donโt grab attention and can often get tossed to the trash bin if they appear spammy in nature.
9% of email recipients report email as spam based solely on the subject line.
Using a clever subject line can ensure youโre at the front of the pecking order rather than last.
Or never.
โ Boosting open rates: Research suggests a strong correlation between subject lines and email open rates. The usage of techniques for generating optimal subject lines, like the ones we suggest in this article, can dramatically improve the odds of your email getting standing out and getting read.
โ Establishing relevance: A good subject line sets the tone for the email content and establishes why youโre relevant, especially if youโre writing to new connections that youโre hoping to convert to clients. Cold emails can often miss the mark. But a strategic follow-up email can inspire the recipient to take the next foot forward in the relationship.
โ Enhancing trust and professionalism: Follow-up emails, especially post a networking event or as a means to reconnect, can showcase your sincerity in wanting to establish a strong connection. A strong professional network can open doors for you, provided youโre able to establish trust and convey professionalism in the way you interact with the recipient.
Best practices for writing effective networking email subject lines
Your subject line is the first thing that a recipient sees and it can determine whether the recipient is going to read it or banish it to the trash bin. A well-planned and carefully-written out subject line grabs the recipientโs attention, conveys the purpose of your email in a concise fashion, and ensures the connection actually goes on to read the email.
By following best practices, you can significantly increase the chances of your email being seen and read.
In this section, weโll cover strategies to create compelling subject lines that will help you pique genuine interest and start building meaningful connections that can foster career growth. These strategies can be just as effective when applied to the main body of the content.
Be clear and concise
Writing short, yet concise email outreach follow-ups helps ensure your recipient doesnโt get bogged down by unnecessary detail. They can easily get an understanding of what to expect in the body of your email without feeling like their time is being wasted. In that sense, it also conveys respect for the recipientโs schedule and their need to optimize the time spent on email.
Aside from that, brevity also has a practical application. After a certain number of characters, the recipient wonโt be able to see the message in its entirety due to limitations with the display.
Consider keeping it as short as possible to achieve both goals. 35 characters or under means it probably wonโt get cut off, but keeping it even shorter โ under 20 characters โ often increases your open rate.
Personalize it to the recipient
Emails without personalized subject lines have an average open rate of 16.67% vs. emails with personalized subject lines that have an average open rate of 35.69%.
Thatโs simply because personalization in the form of using the personโs name or specific and unique details relevant to the individual can stop the scroll instantly. Most marketers and networking professionals often use generic emails sent out in bulk using automation tools.
Personalized subject lines stand out, as they show that you did the research and that youโre genuinely interested in making an impression.
Some examples are โ โ[Name], Nice meeting you at the [Event]โ or โQuick question, [Name]? or even โ[Name], Letโs Grab Coffee?โ
Highlight common connections or interests
If youโre not entirely comfortable with using the first name basis approach, you can opt to highlight common ground in the form of connections or interests that you share with the recipient. This especially matters if youโve been introduced via a referral.
You could refer to things like being from the same college, moving to the same city, joining the same company, mutual interests on social media, and so on.
Convey value
The most effective way to capitalize on networking opportunities is to think of them as win-win relationships. Itโs no different when it comes to crafting your follow-up emails.
Offer something of interest or benefit to the recipient, your aim here is to add value when connecting, as opposed to adding numbers to your network.
This could include referring a useful business contact or potential new hire. You could even share a useful resource or content that would benefit the business. It can be as simple as a referring a recent article that featured the recipientโs name.
From a psychological perspective, itโs about anchoring your personality to valuable information or growth opportunities. Bear in mind, you want to do adequate research to ensure that youโre genuinely bringing value to the recipient whatever youโre offering.
Create a sense of urgency
Fun fact: emails that used the word โtomorrowโ were opened 10% more than those without! Thereโs something to be said about conveying urgency in email subject lines. Email marketing experts use this technique all the time to boost their email open rates and ensure their offers are being read and actioned.
Use the technique sparingly, because using urgency in a haphazard manner can derail even the best of intentions and make you look unflatteringly salesy.
Avoid spammy language
Avoiding spam language can help boost deliverability rates by preventing your content going straight into the spam folder.
To start with, avoid obvious spammy language, for example, โclick here!โ, โdonโt miss this!โ, โact now!โ or even โwin $1000!โ, etc. Next, remember to send your email from recognizable and trustworthy ESPs (Email Service Providers) like Google or Yahoo to avoid spam filters. Avoid sending bulk content frequently that eventually gets flagged as spam content by the recipients. This can signal duplicity to your ESP.
High-performing networking email subject line examples
The following subject lines are applicable for different types of professional scenarios, choose the one that best fits your requirement.
1. Introductory emails (for the first personal outreach)
The common thread in all of these email headers is that there is an element of personalization in each. Personalized emails stand out in a sea of generic emails and are more likely to be opened and read.
To leverage these subject lines effectively, research the prospectโs background with a fine toothed-comb. The idea is to show the recipient youโve done the homework and are genuinely interested in what theyโre doing and potentially building a mutual alliance.
The seeming genuineness of the approach will also increase the likelihood of the recipient responding and wanting to take the engagement forward.
- โQuick question about [specific topic/project] at [Company Name]โ
- โ[Mutual connection] suggested I reach out to youโ
- โInnovative idea for [recipientโs department/role]โ
- โCongratulations on your recent [achievement/news]โ
- โ[Your Name] โ following up on [event/conference] discussionโ
- โImpressed by your work on [specific project/initiative]โ
- โSeeking your expert insights on [industry trend/challenge]โ
- โ[Your Company] + [Their Company]: Potential collaboration?โ
- โNew approach to solving [specific problem in their industry]โ
- โYour TED talk inspired me to reach outโ
2. Job search networking/informational interviews
These subject headers are applicable for different scenarios in job search networking. For example, subject lines seeking career advice can be effective to get your foot in through the door. These are otherwise known as seeking โinformational interviews.โ
A lot of established leaders and business owners are happy to offer career advice, provided thereโs no catch involved. You can however use the opportunity to discreetly highlight your talents, in case thereโs a potential fit for you within their organization.
Other examples are more direct in terms of looking for opportunities within the recipientโs organization. The direct approach can often be appreciated by busy leaders with a scarcity of time.
Last but not least, you can even use commonalities or points of interest as jumping off points, for example showcasing how you enjoyed an article (reference the article) they recently wrote.
- โSeeking advice: Your career path in [industry/role]โ
- โ[Mutual connection] recommended I connect with you about opportunitiesโ
- โImpressed by [Company]โs recent [achievement] โ Any openings?โ
- โFellow [University] alum interested in [Company] opportunitiesโ
- โQuick question about your experience at [Company]โ
- โAdmire your work in [field] โ Can we chat about career growth?โ
- โExploring new opportunities in [industry] โ Your insights would be valuableโ
- โ[Your Name] โ Experienced [Your Role] eager to contribute to [Company]โ
- โInspired by your LinkedIn post on [topic] โ Can we discuss?โ
- โInformational interview request: [Your Field] professionalโ
3. Follow-ups after events
Follow-up emails post-events are the easiest to set up, but you still have to deploy them with care.
When it comes to follow-up subject lines (and emails) after events, reference a specific chat, conversation, or talk where you connected to help them remember you and connect the dots.
- โGreat meeting you at [Event Name] โ Following up on [Topic]โ
- โContinuing our conversation from [Event Name]โ
- โQuick follow-up: [Specific Point of Discussion] at [Event]โ
- โ[Mutual Contactโs Name] suggested I reach out after [Event]โ
- โEnjoyed your insights on [Topic] at [Event] โ Letโs connectโ
- โFollowing up: Your question about [Topic] at [Event Name]โ
- โ[Event Name] attendee โ Interested in your work at [Company]โ
- โPutting [Discussed Idea] into action โ Your thoughts?โ
- โImpressed by your talk at [Event] โ Letโs grab coffee?โ
4. Follow-ups after calls / Zoom meetings
Follow-ups after calls or Zoom meetings require a slightly different approach, especially if youโve had an initial discussion covering potential collaborations and tie-ups.
Ideally, follow up within 24 hours of the initial call or Zoom meeting, while the call is still fresh on everyoneโs minds. Summarize (very briefly) what was discussed, and action steps for the way forward. Remember to thank the prospect for their time and insights.
- โNext steps following our call [yesterday/today/date]โ
- โAction items from our Zoom discussion on [Topic]โ
- โ[Your Name]: Follow-up to our conversation about [Specific Point]โ
- โContinuing our discussion on [Topic] โ Additional thoughtsโ
- โThank you for your time โ Follow-up on [Main Topic]โ
- โ[Company Name] collaboration: Post-call action planโ
- โ[Your Name] โ Moving forward with ideas from our Zoomโ
- โQuick question following up on our [Date] discussionโ
- โImplementing insights from our [Topic] call โ Your input?โ
- โGreat call yesterday โ Confirming our agreed actionsโ
5. LinkedIn connections
You can use these emails to send connection requests or to send emails that include a request to connect on LinkedIn. These subject lines build on themes similar to those we outlined earlier, namely finding points of shared interest, using referrals, asking for informational interviews, and so on.
When writing out emails to your LinkedIn network or prospective LinkedIn network, follow best practices โ be clear about your purpose for reaching out and reference where you connected previously. Donโt forget to customize each email subject line/contents based on the profile of the receiver.
- โ[Shared Group/Alumni] member reaching out about [Opportunity]โ
- โImpressed by your post on [Topic] โ Further discussion?โ
- โQuick question about your experience at [Company Name]โ
- โCongratulations on your recent [Achievement] โ Would love to connectโ
- โ[Mutual Connectionโs Name] suggested I reach out about [Topic]โ
- โIntrigued by your work in [Field] โ Informational interview requestโ
- โ[Your Industry] insights โ Sharing a relevant article and thoughtsโ
- โFollowing your career path โ Seeking mentorship opportunityโ
- โNoticed we both [Shared Experience] โ Letโs compare notesโ
- โ[Your Name] โ Invitation to upcoming [Industry Event/Webinar]โ
- โExpanding my [City/Industry] network โ Virtual coffee chat?โ
6. Outreach based on an article the recipient wrote
Outreach emails can generate a very positive first impression, but itโs crucial to get the phrasing and language right.
Always reference the article in the subject line to establish context. This will also help you get attention in a crowded mailbox. Ensure to discuss something specific that you liked within the article. Generic praise can come across as disingenuous and artificial, whereas praise on specific aspects of the article that you liked showcases that you took the time to actually read and appraise the contents.
- โQuestion about your [Article Title] piece in [Publication]โ
- โInspired by your take on [Topic] โ Potential collaboration?โ
- โYour [Article Title] article โ Aligns with my research on [Topic]โ
- โExtending the conversation from your [Publication] piece on [Topic]โ
- โFascinating point in your [Article Title] โ Industry implications?โ
- โYour article sparked an idea โ Can we discuss?โ
- โ[Article Topic] expert reaching out โ Enjoyed your recent pieceโ
- โBuilding on your [Publication] article โ Additional resourcesโ
- โCounterpoint to your [Article Title] argument โ Open to discussion?โ
- โImplementing ideas from your [Topic] article โ Quick questionโ
- โYour [Publication] piece: Catalyst for my current projectโ
- โSharing my experience related to your [Topic] articleโ
- โTimely insights in your [Article Title] โ Interview requestโ
7. Outreach for a partnership
When doing an outreach follow up email, remember to adopt an intriguing subject line (refer to any of the following subject lines for inspiration) that emphasizes the potential benefits of working together.
Avoid overtly-salesly language, while keeping things professional. Briefly elaborate on the expected benefits and use โaction-orientedโ language to entice the recipient to open the email.
- โ[Your Company] + [Their Company]: Potential collaboration opportunityโ
- โPartnership proposal: Combining our strengths in [Industry]โ
- โExploring synergies between [Your Company] and [Their Company]โ
- โ[Mutual Contact] suggested a potential partnership โ Letโs discussโ
- โJoint venture possibility: Expanding into [New Market/Sector]โ
- โStrategic alliance proposal: Enhancing [Specific Area] togetherโ
- โCollaboration opportunity: Solving [Industry Problem] togetherโ
- โPartnership inquiry: Leveraging our complementary strengthsโ
- โ[Your Product] + [Their Service]: A powerful combination for clients?โ
- โMutual growth through partnership โ Exploring possibilitiesโ
- โInnovative co-branding idea for [Their Company] and [Your Company]โ
- โPartnering for impact: Addressing [Industry Trend] togetherโ
8. Outreach based on a mutual connection
Emails based on mutual connections can work remarkably well because they leverage an element of trust. If the connection is someone they know, and work well with, theyโre more likely to respond to your request to establish a professional relationship.
Remember to reference the mutual acquaintanceโs name in the subject line to establish immediate context and include the purpose in brief. Think of the mutual connection as a bridge to build a connection as opposed to being the ONLY reason for the connection so the relationship gets off on the right track.
- โ[Mutual Connectionโs Name] suggested I reach out โ [Brief Purpose]โ
- โConnecting via [Mutual Connection]: Seeking your insights on [Topic]โ
- โ[Your Name] here โ [Mutual Connection] thought we should connectโ
- โQuick question from [Mutual Connection]โs colleague about [Topic]โ
- โReferral from [Mutual Connection]: Exploring potential collaborationโ
- โ[Mutual Connection] spoke highly of your expertise in [Field]โ
- โFollowing up on [Mutual Connection]โs introduction โ [Brief Purpose]โ
- โMutual connection with [Name] โ Seeking advice on [Specific Topic]โ
- โ[Your Company] + [Their Company]: Partnership idea (via [Mutual Connection])โ
- โ[Mutual Connection] mentioned your work in [Area] โ Can we chat?โ
- โExpanding my network: [Mutual Connection] suggested we connectโ
- โShared passion for [Topic/Industry] โ Intro via [Mutual Connection]โ
- โ[Mutual Connection] recommended I share my [Project/Idea] with youโ
- โCoffee chat request โ [Mutual Connection]โs [Industry] connectionโ
9. Connections made after referrals
With connections made after a referral, you want to establish an element of warmth while not being too friendly. Remember to include the referrerโs name in the subject line together with a very brief overview of the reason for reaching out.
Hint at the value of the relationship in the email and encourage the recipient to connect to learn more or to capitalize on the opportunity.
- โReferred by [Name]: Exploring [Industry] collaboration opportunitiesโ
- โ[Your Name] here โ [Referrer] suggested I reach out about [Topic]โ
- โQuick introduction following [Referrer]โs recommendationโ
- โConnecting per [Referrer]โs suggestion โ [Your Expertise/Role]โ
- โ[Referrer] thought youโd be interested in our [Product/Service/Idea]โ
- โReferral from [Name]: Seeking your insights on [Specific Challenge]โ
- โ[Referrer] mentioned your expertise in [Field] โ Can we chat?โ
- โFollowing [Referrer]โs advice: Introducing [Your Company/Project]โ
- โReferred by [Name] for potential [Type of Opportunity]โ
- โ[Referrer] suggested youโre the perfect person to discuss [Topic]โ
- โExpanding my network: Referred by [Name] for [Specific Reason]โ
Level up your networking game
A strong subject line can stand out in cluttered mailboxes encouraging prospects to engage with you and take the next step forward in the relationship. Remember to leverage commonalities and extensively research your prospectโs background to make the email personalized and relevant to them.
Writing effective subject lines that actually get your email read can seem very daunting at first. But, if you follow the best practices and tips outlined in this article, youโre well on your way to successfully expanding your network and establishing your own circle of professional influence.
For more useful content on the subject of writing emails that get seen, read, and responded to, check out these detailed resources:
โ 8 Employee Referral Email Samples to Use on Repeat
โ How To Ask for Referrals in an Email: 15 Tips [+ Templates and Examples]
โ Brand Ambassador Email Templates: 6 Ambassador Outreach Emails to Use in Your Program